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I've always loved noir detective stories and have been surprised by the lack of them I see around here. Gwasi shows maybe one or two Noir scripts every month or two. They fit the narrative style very well, so I tried this idea. If this is well-liked, I have several others I might write. I might even use the same character.
A very special shout out to Christina u/dominaexcrucior for taking the time to beta-read this for me. Her insight was hugely helpful, and I definitely needed reminding that saying a woman has huge natural, but perky boobs doesn't quite make sense. I really should have thought that sentence through better. 🤣
Summary - PI is telling a story about a cheating wife case that went in a different direction than was expected.
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