This is my first finished attempt at a script. I have done tons of short erotic stories but never dabbled in scripts until now. I don’t know all the correct formatting and all the ones I have read here have different styles. I tried to borrow from the ones I liked reading. I have another script half done but I realized the scope of it was far too big for someone as inexperienced as myself. I was two thousand words in when I figured out it has too many SFX and far too many stage directions than I feel comfortable with as a novice. I can be my own worse critic sometimes. Instead, I went with this shorter romantic secondary idea I had as a backup. This one is fairly simple so if anyone wanted to swap the genders it wouldn’t be that hard. All helpful feedback is appreciated and please be gentle on me. Seriously, dialog flows easily but writing sex as directions with sounds has been more challenging than I expected. I might do something more narrative next time. It might be more natural for me to learn first.

*Updated* I got some great feedback from u/dominaexcrucior and revised this script. I believe it is formatted correctly now and flows better. I may make small changes if I get further feedback. Thank you all for being nice to me about this first script!

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[Tags] [Romantic] [Pampering] [Lover] [Kissing] [Footrub] [Massage] [Oral] [Teasing] [Listener-O] [Cheesy] [Hallmarky] [Attempt At Humor] [L-Bombs]

Performer - Male

Listener - Female

Summary - Your boyfriend has made you breakfast in bed for no reason that you can think of but he has a reason. You just don’t know the whole story yet.

*All characters in this script are over the age of 18 . It is not for any commercial or monetary recording. Feel free to make any changes or improvise to your heart's content but advise the writer of it. Also, please credit the writer in the post.

Script Link HERE