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This is this the first script I ever wrote for a commission I had done back in March for my birthday. The VA who very kindly did a rush job said she was impressed with the script and when I contacted her earlier this week about doing another project together now that Iāve graduated, she seemed happy to get to take another go at one of my scripts.
That being said I know that it could use some work, being my first script and there are already some things I want to change. In the synopsis I write that the character, Cindy, is in her early forties but upon listening to the finished piece I just realized that āBimbo MILFā might not be a combination I can pull of just yet so Iāll be retconning her to early thirties (thinking 32) in future pieces.
But Iām more than open to any and all feedback as I move towards my next project, the working title of which is āWedding Jobā
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