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[Feedback] Part one of episodic script
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Hey there! I am trying to write an episodic script detailing how a succubus and a hero fuck and fight their way through hell, and I’d love some feedback before posting to GWA, this is my first script where I’ve tried to really develop the speaker’s character, as well as my first episodic script. I would also like to know if it’s good enough to warrant a second part. Any feedback is appreciated though. Thanks!
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