Howdy guys. I've actually managed to write another M4F/M4M script after, what, almost a year? The last one was my first ever script: Even Catboys Go Into Heat, if you've never seen it before. I've been meaning to make a sequel to that one, but it's been somewhat difficult to put my thoughts to intelligible text.

But anyway, this script... it's pretty dirty. It's my first script with multiple speakers, or at least the first I felt confidant enough to publish. But, I tagged this post as "Feedback" because I would like to know if the dialogue flows alright, or if it feels awkward, too forced, or not descriptive enough. One speaker does talk more than the other, so I'd like to know if that's okay, too.

Here's the synopsis. (I'm pretty bad at writing these):

It was going to be a good day today, so you decided to have an early morning picnic. Luckily, barely anyone showed up to the park. Well, that was until a cute foxboy popped out of nowhere. A very kissy, affectionate foxboy at that. He came to have a picnic with his master, and would like you to join them. Problem is, he isn’t hungry for food. He has a different snack in mind.

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Foxboy: Hehe. I think we're close to breaking him. Come on, master. Come play with us.

Master: We're... we're in public...

Foxboy: There's no one around. We haven't seen anyone else all day.

(Flirty) It's just us here~ ♫

Here's the MM4F and MM4M versions.

And here's their respective tags. Thanks for your time!

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MM4F: [Mdom] [Playful Bratty Mswitch] [Fsub] [Bisexual Speakers] [Monster boy] [Outdoor] [Threesome] [Teasing] [Kissing] [Exhibitionism] [Nipple Play] [Cunnilingus] [Deepthroat] [Double Blowjob] [Lots of Oral] [Spitroast] [Vaginal] [Facial] [Cum Eating] [Cum Swap] [Multiple Orgasms] [Good Girl] [Slut] [Praise]

MM4M: [Mdom] [Playful Bratty Mswitch] [Msub] [Monster boy] [Outdoor] [Threesome] [Teasing] [Kissing] [Exhibitionism] [Nipple Play] [BJ] [Deepthroat] [Double Blowjob] [Lots of Oral] [Spitroast] [Anal] [Facial] [Cum Eating] [Cum Swap] [Multiple Orgasms] [Good Boy] [Slut] [Praise]

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Edit: Here's a MM4F fill by u/OneWhoCravesSouls69! Thank you!

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The author and all characters are 18 . Real foxes only live to about 4 years, but luckily that doesn't apply to foxboys.

You're free to change pronouns, avoid SFX, ad-lib, or anything of the sort. Just please credit me if you decide to use my script, and don't forget to tag or notify me. My Reddit usage is fickle, so I might miss your fill. Thank you.