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[Feedback requested][F4F][TF4TF] The fun side of disobedience [two versions/scripts] [fdom speaker/listener][established relationship][bratty listener/speaker][playful, nasty brat energy][degradation][praise][aggressive][brat taming][punishing][handcuffs][CNC] for safety [Rape][many more tags]
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Crusuz is a trans female looking for a trans female in many more tags
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all tags in total: [two versions/scripts][fdom speaker][established relationship][bratty listener][playful, nasty brat energy][degradation][praise][pet names][no genital mentions][aggressive][provoking][brat taming][punishing][face sitting][handcuffs][kissing][tonguefucking][mistess][spanking][rough][mutual masturbation][speaker & listener orgasm][sweet aftercare][CNC] so for safety [Rape]

Hiii there! This time I need a feedback not on one, but two scripts before I release them! Both are the same story/premise, just told from opposing POVs. I'll take any feedback, on anything you'd want to give it on. The scripts themselves, tags, title, pacing, wording, construction, instructions, you name it. Both from the perspective of listener and a VA. I especially want to know if I've gotten my tags right, as it's my first time writing something this rough. TY all in advance.

The premise: speaker and listener have been in a dom/sub relationship for a while, but it never really got rough. Sub was always obedient, sweet and cuddly, and her mistress never was too rough, being more of the gentle kind. But one day the sub decided to change that. After all, why the hell should she always listen to her mistress? What will she do punish her? She'd definitely love to see her try that.

Here for ver 1, speaker punishing the bratty listener

Ver 2, where speaker is the brat, who needs some taming from you

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