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All the tags that didn't fit in the title: [handcuffs][a little possessive][breast play][cuddling][loving]
Link to the script post on GWA Sapphic: https://www.reddit.com/r/GWASapphic/comments/u31fko/f4f_waking_up_with_your_mistress_fdom_speakerfsub/
And directly to the script: https://scriptbin.works/u/Crusuz/f4f-waking-up-with-your-mistress-fdom-speaker
This is the 2nd script I've written. Made it a while ago, but it kind of never got any feedback and stuff, so I'm wondering what could have been better/improved in it. Am looking for feedback for pretty much anything (tags, title, formatting, instructions, suggestions, sounds, summary, pacing, script post etc. etc. If you could say something about it, I'll gladly hear it). Especially since I'd like to write something again with dommy stuff in the future, so that knowledge will be very appreciated. TY in advance
Also, since I've never voiced a script, idk what are good do/don't to make something be fun to fill, and not a pain. So if there's some improvements/QoL advice someone could add from a perspective of VA, I'd love to hear it too
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