Hi everyone! I've returned seeking feedback for my second script. (Well, the first I wrote, but I wanted to hold this one back a bit.) It's relatively personal, both in that it's based on a scenario I've had in my head since I came out to myself and that I wrote it primarily with myself as the performer in mind (though I'll put it up as a script offer for others too). I'd appreciate any thoughts about how I can improve it.
Performer: Trans woman. Has breasts. Genitals referred to as āgirlcockā and ācockā.
Listener: Cis woman (the setup doesnāt make sense otherwise). Has breasts and a vagina.
CW: Unintentional transphobia from listener (no slurs). Alcohol. Reference to bottom surgery.
Performer notes: You are a trans woman and have been best friends with the listener as long as you can remember. Youāre both grown-ass adults and itās been a while since you saw each other. You had a crush on her in middle school, and either that never went away or itās recently reawoken; either way, at the moment itās only subconscious. Youāre fairly confident in yourself, at least around your best friend, but still have lingering insecurities about your body.
Non voice sound-effects (purely optional): Cork popping, bed creaking.
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