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This was originally an improvisation for the occasion of Valentineās 2020. It started as an ode of sorts to the voices of GWA... and ended with a detailed improv on a first kiss. I have transcribed the words here, should anyone like to make use of this for an audio this weekend, or anytime. Kissing is evergreen. It doesnāt have to be just for mid-February!
Info: This āscriptā is about 900 words, which in words:minutes shorthand calculation translates to about 9-10 minutes. This audio took me 12 minutes, but of course, it was an extemporaneous improv/ramble with many pauses since I was thinking as I was speaking. That info is just to give you an idea of pacing. Donāt be afraid to take your time. Imagine explaining a new concept to someone. Let them drink in your words.
Please feel free to add to, redact, adapt, improv etc. as youād like. Think of this as a recipe starter. Please tag me at u/POVscribe if you record. I would love to hear your rendition! The script is below. There is no paste link. ā„
Prologue, where I was just rambling. You can choose to voice/adapt, or not.
(soft laugh) So all day Iāve been admiring and enjoying the submissions on GWA and similar sites around Valentineās Day.
And itās just amazing the range of approaches and moods. Everything from romanticā¦ to kinkyā¦ to rapeyā¦ to raunchyā¦ to fantasyā¦(soft laugh) Just everything, really. Itās amazing. Something for everyone. Or. a few things for most people.
But underneath it all, Iāve just been feeling this great affection, or I should say, a desire to convey affection, whether it be a Valentineās message, or an anti Valentineās message.
Really rambling now, but what I really wanted to say was Iāve been thinking all day about kissing. I actually heard another performer rambling about kissing, and... the intimate nature of kissing.
You know, so many times, for those of us who fill scripts, there would be a cueā¦ in parenthesesā¦ kissing, or kissing noises, or mouth noises, and so forth.Ā
But Iāve been meditating today aboutā¦ just kissing. Rememberā¦ when you were youngerā¦ or not even when you were younger, just anytime.Ā
Whether youāre partnered or not. The time before that. The time JUST before that. When you were getting to know that person better.
Or you were *wanting* to get to know that person better. That moment when theyāre talking to you. And you are just looking at their lipsā¦ and you can barely concentrate on what theyāre saying.
You know what Iām talking about.
And sometimes, you might find yourself.... Just making small talk, and babbling, on and on and on. (soft laugh) While youāre both just dying to kiss each other. Or share that first kiss.
And usually, I think this is the case, oftentimes the first kissā¦ thereās just kissing, right? Not like in scripts so much, where you kiss a bit, then next thing you knowā¦ youāre going at it. (soft laugh)
So originally, I wanted to make a 2-minute kissing audio. But here I am with this longĀ ramble. Which actually, is like the build-up to the first kiss, no?Ā
You might find yourself rambling, SO much looking forward to that kiss. And yetā¦ not quite dreading it, butā¦
You know what it is? I think itās, ahhhh, such a sweet memory. Gives me shivers just to think about it.
Not dreadingā¦ of course not...not dreading the first kiss.
But dreading that momentā¦ *before* that first kiss.
Because once youāve kissed, youāve *already* kissed. (soft laugh) And yeah, it wonāt be in your future anymore, ever, with that person.Ā
Becauseā¦ there can only be one first kiss. With that person.
[PAUSE]
The Kiss. Describing the First Kiss {I include moans etc., but you can also just read as a slow narrative, with some nice pauses. Feel free to pepper in details as you like, especially if you have someone in mind. This might make a nice voice message for someone, too. ā„ }
So... let me take you through our first kiss, then.
And finally, the chatter dies down. And the moment is here, at last. Thereās no escaping it.
Our faces come closerā¦ to each other. And Iām looking into your eyes, butā¦ youāre so close I can also see the details of your face.
Your skinā¦ even your pores. (soft laugh). Andā¦ the outline of your lips. Your upper lip. Your lower lip.
And there, I can just now feel your warm breath. Youāre breathing very lightly, as if you donāt want to disturb the balance. You donāt want to change anything.
You donāt want me to change my mind. (softly, almost under breath) But I wonāt change my mind.
And Iām trying to decide, should I kiss you first? Or should I wait, and let you come to meā¦? Mmmmā¦
Ah, there. Youāre coming to me. (optional: soft kisses, moans, etc.)
Soā¦ the first kisses areā¦ hmmmā¦ just the lips. [pause] ā¦ but the lips are just slightly open.
So thereās that.. promise.. . of more. (soft moan)
And, itās probably me that loses patience first. I let my lips open, more. Invite you in. (whisper) Ah, yesā¦
Then I just letā¦ the tip of my tongue go inside your mouth. (whimper)
And, Iād probably put my hands nowā¦ either on your thighā¦ probably one hand on your thigh, and the other hand around your neck (or: in your hair).
(moan) And finally our tongues meetā¦ justā¦ exploring ā¦ just inside each otherās mouth. Not like trying to drown me in tongue or anything. Or I you. (soft laugh, light moan)
Oh my, I love lip kissing. I mean, tongue is nice, butā¦ I wanna know what you can do with those lips.
Yesā¦ put your hands on me now. (sigh) Oh yes, you might pull away and (moan) kiss my jawline, kiss my neck, kiss behind my ear.
(soft laugh) Mmmm, your breath is so warmā¦ (moan) and all I can think about is, how your mouth will feel. Later. Or another time. On my body.
But right now, I just want you to kiss me. (moan)
Andā¦ thatās how it wasā¦ our first kiss.
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