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Dinner didn't quite go to plan when Silly Boy burned his tongue and now needs a gentle punishment.
Yes, I burnt my tongue exactly like this the other day. Still hurts.
My other scripts have been rather story inclined so in an attempt to improve as a writer, with this one I wanted a bit of cutesy set up and then the main course to proceed. (That's a food pun cause it's set in a kitchen.) I feel like I’m better at story and less adept at the sexy dialogue description so that’s what my focus is here. Also I’m trying for less directing cues and ellipses so that the people who record this, if any do, can really make it their own. Also, trying a dual POV cause I think M4F scripts are way easier and I should practice F4M too.
Please click here for the Msub Point of View
Please click here for the Fdomme Point of View
Composite Dialogue of both m/f POV < This is intended to be helpful but imo shouldn't replace the script cause it's a bit of a mess and less edited. Might do the opposite of being "helpful" IDK, lemme know if I shouldn't include this next time.
Feel free to swap the dom / sub genders if you vibe with it reversed.
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