Hi everyone! Looking for some advice.

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I've been writing scripts since last fall, and I've been lucky enough to have had six of my eight scripts filled. I'm really grateful that I've had those filled, all by great performers, and a few scripts even have multiple fills. What a cool community!

To polish my skills a little bit, I want to revisit my two scripts that didn't get filled and see if there's any way I can punch them up. I still like the concepts and the writing, but clearly they're not appealing to everyone.

Does anyone have any tips for how to improve these?

Note: one of them is an FFF4M, and I understand collabs are always a long shot, and maybe that's part of why. Still, any notes are appreciated!

Scripts are below:
YOUR INSTAGRAM CRUSH (F4M): https://www.reddit.com/r/gonewildaudio/comments/d0ieij/script_offer_f4m_your_instagram_crush_go_ahead/

EXES REUNITE -- ALL THREE OF THEM (FFF4M): https://www.reddit.com/r/gonewildaudio/comments/dwgs8i/exes_reunite_all_three_of_them_fff4m_script_offer/