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Yo Script Guild,
Plot Synopsis: A tour guide finds a couple sneaking off for a little public exhibitionism and decides to educate them on a few things, by force.
This has been a particularly stressful week at work for me and I've been pouring all of that negativity into this script for the last 3 days. The result is easily my darkest script yet.
I'm honestly not sure if this is truly an [FF4M] script as the tour guide character has far more dialogue than the girlfriend but in any case I'd love some feedback as I've never written a scene between more than 2 people before.
Here's the script: https://pastebin.com/nGMuGRFm
I think I'll try my hand at some more vanilla stuff for my next script. I don't want to typecast myself as the Femdom guy.
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