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heelboy67 is a female looking for a male in Cum Bath

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Aloha ScriptGuild!

First of all, here is the script.

The basic idea: You read a letter from your master and do what he orders you to.

I'm struggling with several details.
Overall, do you think it is too complicated to carry out?
Second, I want the performer to strip / change. This should probably happen before the recording process. Too long inside the audio.
But really in the letter she can't do it before she has read the instruction. (Am I making sense?) So I came up with this "stop the recording" thing (l. 59) which feels pretty awkward.
Then there is this super romantic aftercare in between (l. 156 - 163 as of now). I love this paragraph but it totally breaks the flow from this filthy fantasy to "Hands Off".

Thanks for your thoughts and opinions. :)

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heelboy67

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Cum Bath

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a female

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a male

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