[Feedback] [Script] [F4M] Jerking For The Hairdresser [JOI] [Gentle FDom] [Hold The Moan] [Whispers]...

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[Feedback] [Script] [F4M] Jerking For The Hairdresser [JOI] [Gentle FDom] [Hold The Moan] [Whispers] [Hair Salon]

Author Summary

SilentThyzer is a female looking for a male in Hair Salon

Post Body

Hello everyone. I've written a draft of a script and I'd love any feedback you could offer. Anything from formatting, to pacing even spelling and grammar. Let me know what changes I can make, either in the comments or a PM if you prefer.

Synopsis: A hairdresser notices one of her customers getting hard while giving him a haircut. She convinces him to jerk off underneath his smock and gently dominates him while trying to make sure nobody in the crowded salon finds out what the two of them are doing.

Script can be found here

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90%

Account Age

6 years

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Yes

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715

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475

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240

Profile updated: 6 days ago

Posts updated: 10 months ago

SilentThyzer

Thick Thighs Save Lives

Subreddit

r/GWAScriptGuild

Post Details

Location

Hair Salon

They Are

a female

Looking For

a male

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Posted: 6 years ago
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