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A preacher picks up a hitchhiker out of the goodness of his heart. She thinks up a way to repay him for his kindness.
This script went through several iterations, but at its core I wanted to write a script where a seductive hitchhiker offers herself to a strait-laced but kind older man who helped her in a time of need.
I hope I was successful in portraying the seduction in a way that step by step he is lead into cheating on his wife while making it feel like it wasn't wrong to do so, but I might go back to rewrite some parts to indicate more reluctance on his part.
I also like the angle where what she finds about him most attractive is his goodness and maybe subconsciously her real desire to corrupt that goodness.
Overall I enjoyed writing this script, especially in sprinkling in all the subtle (and perhaps not so subtle ) biblical references.
SCRIPT: https://pastebin.com/Pi5HxrqM
SCRIPT ARCHIVE: https://www.reddit.com/r/flos_legere/
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