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[Feedback][F4F] Multi-part Scripts with Perspective Changes
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endlessgin is a female looking for a female in feedback
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I don't really know if that title conveys what I mean, but anyway, here's my current dilemma.

I just finished an f4f script about a high school girl and her college age tutor who shows her the joys of oral, etc, etc. I quite like the script, and already have ideas for future installments, but i thought briefly, how crazy would it be for one part to be from the high schooler's perspective, and another part from the college student's perspective?

Is that crazy? Does it harm the narrative flow in some way? Are there barriers that I'm not quite seeing at this point? Any and all thoughts would be appreciated! (Additionally, feel free to ask me to clarify if parts of the post don't make sense :p)

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