[FF4M][Feedback] Princess Bubblegum and Marceline the Vampire Queen [Sequel][Adventure Time]

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SwitchGentleman is a female/female couple, or multiple females looking for a male in Adventure Time

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It's my cakeday, so to celebrate here's a sequel to my last script.

https://pastebin.com/BsJQkdSn

Set a year after the first script, it deals with Marcy being horny and asking her BFF to help her out. I'm working with the headcanon that the two of them were sexual partners in the past. There's no real romantic tension between them in this, they're just sexing it up together.

I'm hoping to get some feedback before I post to the main GWA sub. I tried my best to make it decent quality, but a fresh perspective would be welcomed.

I don't really have much else to say, except I like the "going to get changed" pun.

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SwitchGentleman

Exactly how long can you make fl

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a female/female couple, or multiple females

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a male

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