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I've been working on this one for a while and wanted to get a second opinion.
The setup is that the listener is an A.I. copy of themselves, from before the mushroom war, who PB helped create a new biologicap/cyborg body, and, well.. GWA happens.
When I write, I try to make the protagonist able to put themselves into the role easily, to imagine they're the ones in the situation. So I made them from before the apocalypse, as none of us live in the post-war.
Something similar could have been done with cryogenics, but I prefer this way. Making them an A.I./cyborg allows the listener to imagine they could have easily became romantically compatable with PB. Being a supercomputer lets them imagine they're smart enough to be an equal and partner when it comes to science. Being a nanobot cyborg basically allows them to not age, like PB doesn't seem to. And it gives the two lots ot time to bond, meaning they don't go from meeting to fucking instantly. They met and started to like each other long before the possibility of a physical relationship was a possability, and the change in that situation sparks the events of the script.
I think I think about stuff to much..
If people like the idea I might to a FF4M PB and Marceline sequel.
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