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SYNOPSIS:The scene begins with a married woman quietly sliding into bed with her husband in the early hours of the morning. She's just returned, later than planned, from a date night with a new lover and is keen to not disturb her husband and get to sleep as quickly as possible. Her husband however, who has been awake the entire night, worrying and wondering about his wife's activities, isn't certain that he can wait until morning to hear how everything went...
Would love to hear what anyone could make of this, particularly if they can affect the whispery pillow talk vibe I'm going for. It's also been a little while since I wrote one of these, so feedback is always welcomed!
P.S. Sharing to this sub to feel out any extra interest, but also curious for feedback on this topic/kink. My initial response to this subject matter is generally getting downvoted. I understand it wouldn't be for everyone and could touch nerves, but I scratch my head a bit when there is a lot of much nastier stuff that seems to do well. Too niche or too boring maybe? Or maybe just my scripts (I'm aware I'm still practicing and honing). I'm not going to stop because it's my own dumb kink that I'm stuck with, but I'm curious if anyone has any insights.
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