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[A4A][Feedback]Contrary Motion [SFW][Original Music][Educational?][Intermediate Harmony Lessons][Teacher/Student][Adults][Exes][Gratuitous Music/Relationship Analogies]
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nonpopper90 is anyone looking for anyone in Gratuitous Music/Relationship Analogies
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I thought I'd get a bit experimental and write a piece of music in tandem with a script.

The idea is for the VA to say certain lines at certain points in the music, tying in with what's happening. It may be a bit difficult but I think it'll be really neat if someone can pull it off.

I would have liked to do a live recording, but alas, I don't have a full orchestra on retainer, so you'll have to settle for samples.

Synopsis (Listener perspective): You wanted to learn more about music theory, so you signed up for a music composition course at the local community college, but it turns out the professor is an old flame of yours. You meet them in their office for advice on a composition project, but it soon becomes clear that the kind of harmony they want to discuss isn't just the musical kind.

>>>>>>SCRIPT<<<<<<

For the music, check the link in the script.

Writing this reinforced my belief that I am an entire wheel of cheese, but hopefully cheesy is someone's preferred flavor.

I'd like feedback on how doable the whole concept is for a VA, as well as the usual "consistency of character/tone" and "pacing" stuff.

I also welcome feedback on the music. It's not really on the level of something a music professor would compose, but hopefully my patchwork of knowledge gleaned from books, YouTube and the occasional music lesson got me somewhere. Let me know if I need to work on my mix or something.

Word count: 1137 words including directions

Inclusivity notes: No physical descriptions of speaker or listener.

Sound Effects and Improv: The original music is essential to the script. All non-music sound effects optional, but I think they're helpful to set the scene.

A bit of improv or rephrasing to help your reading feel more natural to you is welcome, but I would prefer if you keep the wording in the section where the music plays as close to the original as possible.

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