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[Feedback/Beta] [F4M] The Neighbor is a Phone Sex Operator [Narrative] [phone sex] [different accents] [voyeurism] [masturbation] [light stalking]
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SammyMarx is a female looking for a male in light stalking
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Summary: You have been lightly stalking your hot neighbor. At night you can hear through the thin walls of your apartment that she is a phone sex operator. You can’t help but listen in when you hear her phone ring.

This is my first narration/second script. I'm not sure if the formatting is right. I also am torn about the end. Should I add another scene, or should I end it as is? I struggle with length (that's what she said).

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