Gone wild? More like "gone mild"...

(I'll show myself out.)

I thought I'd try my hand at something targeted to /r/PillowTalkAudio, so here's a little no-sex script (although I'm not really opposed to adding sex).

Synopsis (listener perspective): Your co-worker is having a bad time at the company holiday party. All the lights and noise are overwhelming them, they can't strike up a proper conversation because the music is too loud, and the fancy costume they're wearing is uncomfortably hot. You spot them quietly suffering at a table in the corner and help them get out of the venue to someplace more quiet - specifically, your hotel room.

/u/nonpopper90/a4a-helping-your-introverted-co-worker-escape">>>>>>>SCRIPT<<<<<<

Mainly looking for feedback on these things:

• Pacing
• Character consistency
• Are there spots that feel disjointed?
• Does the emotion "land" for you?

Thanks in advance!

Word count: 1775 words including directions

Sound effects and improv: I didn't intend for this script to be so SFX-heavy at first, but since it moves between locations, the background sounds are important. A bit of improv or rephrasing to help your reading feel more natural to you is welcome

Inclusivity notes: No physical/genital descriptions for speaker or listener, except that listener is described as good-looking in the speaker's opinion.

Feel free to adapt the script for specific speaker/listener genders if you want to, but ideally no changes will be necessary.

Copyright/Disclaimer: This script is written by someone over 18 years of age, for consumption by people over 18 years of age, and all characters in the script are consenting adults over 18 years of age. All rights to this script are reserved by the author, with the exception that rights are granted to record the script and freely post it as long as the person who makes the recording doesn't charge money for access to it.