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Hello!
I am once again requesting your feedback...
Synopsis (Listener's perspective): You decided you wanted to learn Tagalog, and hired a freelance tutor. She's been making house calls and giving you lessons for a few months now. She's been patient and helpful, and you've found yourself falling for her a little. Sometimes you just get lost in her voice instead of picking up on the lessons she's discussing. You've dropped a few hints, but she hasn't been reciprocating... until today.
With this script, I've made one of every kind of script I said I would make in my intro post!
This was pretty tough to make, not going to lie. I had to actually look up verb tables, and I'm still second guessing if putting in a long, and likely boring, actual "lesson" at the start is going to actually work, so I'd appreciate your opinions on that. My reasoning for leaving it in is that a good VA could read the back of a shampoo bottle and still sound sexy, so...
Aside from feedback on that, and pacing in general, I'd also appreciate it if someone pointed out any errors in my Tagalog. Considering the theme of the script, it would be ironic if they were left in.
Word count: 1983 words including directions and translations
Inclusivity notes: Speaker has breasts and a vagina. No genital descriptors for listener.
Sound Effects and Improv: All sound effects optional, but I think they're helpful to set the scene. A bit of improv or rephrasing to help your reading feel more natural to you is welcome, especially since I'm not an expert at dirty talk in Tagalog at all, ha.
Copyright/Disclaimer: This script is written by someone over 18 years of age, for consumption by people over 18 years of age, and all characters in the script are consenting adults over 18 years of age. All rights to this script are reserved by the author, with the exception that rights are granted to record the script and freely post it as long as the person who makes the recording doesn't charge money for access to it.
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