The council has spoken. There must be a Part 2 to my previous script so that the wonderful voices of GWA can tickle your ears performing it.

And once I get some feedback here, there will be!

Synopsis (Listener's perspective): It's only been a few hours since the guy in the apartment next to yours slammed on your door, slammed you on the table, and slammed his cock into you, before rushing off to make a work call. You've stayed quiet like he told you to, but you find yourself already wanting more. Soon enough, you hear a familiar knock on your door again...

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Word count: 995 words

Inclusivity notes: speaker has a penis; listener has breasts and a vagina

Pet names: Good girl, silly girl

Sound Effects and Improv: All sound effects optional, but I think they're important to set the scene. A bit of improv or rephrasing to help your reading feel more natural to you is welcome.

Copyright/Disclaimer: This script is written by someone over 18 years of age, for consumption by people over 18 years of age, and all characters in the script are consenting adults over 18 years of age. All rights to this script are reserved by the author, with the exception that rights are granted to record the script and freely post it as long as the person who makes the recording doesn't charge money for access to it.

I'd like feedback on clarity of directions, pacing, and character/tone consistency, as usual. I also want to make sure these two safety/consent check-ins are done properly:

Check-In #1

How does it feel? My hands gripping your wrists, pinning you down?

(pause)

Your pulse is going a mile a minute already...

Hey, look at me.

Don't let me hurt you, okay? You'd better let me know if my grip is too tight, or you'll get your "good girl" privileges suspended.

Check-In #2

You'd better be ready, because I can't stop myself from... going harder...

[bed creaking speeds up, continues through next few lines]

You good? Those had better be cries of pleasure.

(short pause)

Perfect. Music to my ears.

Thanks in advance!