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Well, I guess it's time for some shameless self-indulgence.
I've only seen one or two scripts for the balloon fetish, none of which match the particular flavor that I'm into, so it's time to cook my own meal. I don't have high hopes that this will get filled, especially since by its nature it has quite a few mandatory balloon SFX that might make it more difficult to fill, but hey, anything is possible.
This was quite a bit harder to write than my previous scripts, as I was trying to write something niche while still having some potential for appeal to people outside that niche. Honestly, I'm not feeling that confident about this one yet.
As usual, I'm looking for feedback on consistency of characterization/tone, pacing, and clarity of directions.
Synopsis (Listener POV): You just attended a house party at your old friend's house. You've had feelings for her for a while, and after the rest of the guests cleared out, you were standing outside her house, trying to find the words to tell her. But when you head back inside, you hear some strange noises from her bedroom and catch her stark naked, straddling a giant balloon while blowing another one up. Some rather silly, yet rather sexy, things happen after that...
Word count: 1816 words (although a lot of it is SFX directions)
Inclusivity notes: speaker has breasts and a vagina; listener has a penis. Speaker has listener blow up a balloon, so that could be rough for people with asthma or other respiratory conditions.
Sound Effects and Improv: Balloon sound effects are mandatory, others are optional. A bit of improv or rephrasing to help your reading feel more natural to you is welcome.
Copyright/Disclaimer: This script is written by someone over 18 years of age, for consumption by people over 18 years of age, and all characters in the script are consenting adults over 18 years of age. All rights to this script are reserved by the author, with the exception that rights are granted to record the script and freely post it as long as the person who makes the recording doesn't charge money for access to it.
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