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So, when I said in my introduction that I'd be too busy to write any scripts soon, what I actually meant was that I would spend a couple hours feverishly hammering away at my keyboard, read over the results once, and post them after a bit of minor editing.
Since my first script was F4M, I thought I'd try M4F for a change.
It would be great if I could get feedback on this, especially on pacing, clarity of directions, and whether the speaker's tone feels consistent.
Synopsis: Listener has been pent up all week and finally has a day off to stay home and really give herself some lovin'. But just as she starts getting into it, Speaker, who lives in the apartment next to her, knocks on the door and demands that she keep the noise down, since he has an important call for work coming up. Annoyed at the interruption, she asks him what he's going to do about it, and gets more than she was expecting...
Pet names: Good girl
Inclusivity notes: speaker has a penis; listener has a vagina
Sound Effects and Improv: All sound effects optional, but I think they're important to set the scene. A bit of improv or rephrasing to help your reading feel more natural to you is welcome.
Copyright/Disclaimer: This script is written by someone over 18 years of age, for consumption by people over 18 years of age, and all characters in the script are consenting adults over 18 years of age. All rights to this script are reserved by the author, with the exception that rights are granted to record the script and freely post it as long as the person who makes the recording doesn't charge money for access to it.
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