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Happy Weekend! I wrapped up a script I'd been working on for about two weeks. It's a pretty simple idea that I've had for a while. I'm looking for feedback on a few things. It is about 1800 words. See the list below.
- Does everything flow properly and make sense.
- Did I over-direct or under-direct in my directions?
- Do I have all the proper tags?
- Any general thoughts or opinions about it?
- Ideas or suggestions about the name? I generally suck at them.
Thanks in advance to anyone who gives it a look!
Summary
You’ve had to move home to closely monitor your aging parents. Living with them is not working out, so you have considered buying your own place nearby. Your mom recommended a real estate agent she knows. The agent is very attractive, making riding around with her fun and flirty. The bad part is every property has been wrong for you. She has decided to show you another house in a snowstorm tonight. It beat being snowed in with bickering parents, so you went despite the storm.
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