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I decided to write a script about everyone's green haired, petite woman of mass destruction.
Here's the script in question.
Please, let me know what you guys think, especially if you're an OPM fan.I think I did quite well. I have a couple of things I'd like to point out.
FIrst, I wrote it so the listener and Tornado were both present at the research facility from her backstory. Since, in this version of the universe, Tornado wasn't entirely alone, she didn't grow up to be quite as anti-social as her canon counterpart. She had another person important to her, but also strong enough for her to respect, so she basically has someone she respects and listens to in her life.
Second, I tried not to be too explicit with the size difference thing. Tornado doesn't call herself small. At most, she says he is tall/large. I feel she is probably less insecure about her height in this version, since she always had the listener to rely on for emotional support, but she doesn't like it pointed out, and they're so close the listener knows not to make a big deal about it.
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