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Oh hi there! This is my first script, and while I think it's mostly okay, I'd like some feedback. Is there anything I can add to make things clearer to read or understand? Or from an artist's perspective (if anyone ever decides to fill this) is there anything I can do to make things easier to translate into recording? Are there any additional tags I should add to this?
Give me those sweet, sweet constructive thoughts.
Summary -
Listener is under the influence of one too many edibles and is stuck in a very aware, very awake state of paralysis. Listener knows they’re awake and just too high to move. Over the last few weeks, a sleep paralysis demon has been haunting the listener, but the listener thinks their experiences with the demon have been nothing more than dreams. The demon wants to make sure the listener knows just how real he is, and that the listener is never getting rid of him.
Peace, love, and THC,
Moon <3
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