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Howdy! I have another script and looking for someone to glance it over. I think I just need a second set of eyes. The beginning has three characters in the room but only one speaker. I want to make sure that dialog makes sense and flows properly. Also looking to make sure I didn't miss any tags. It's about 2000 words.
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You have been tutoring a high school student to make a few bucks while in college. Wrapping up a session, the particularly sexy but kind of scary mom asks you to meet her in her office for your payment. She might have more than a payment in mind. Maybe a bonus too.
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