It's been a thousand years and a day (if you don't know where that's from, we can't be friends) but it's finished! Parts of writing this script was like pulling teeth, but I put my best foot forward and wrote the damn thing even if it is a bit over 3k :)

Now, I'm looking for feedback from a few who are able to for this baby. I'm hoping that being open and hearing others' opinion/perspective will help make this a bit better. Please keep in mind that this is my first erotic audio script and while I do enjoy advice and tips, I'm not interested in receiving *harsh* criticism. You'll get blocked so fucking fast.

A few things I'd love feedback on are tags (not sure if I'm missing anything or should remove any), the flow of dialogue, use of SFX effects and tonal direction (a lot of it is optional and there for the speaker to get into the story easier), and if anything doesn't make sense. With my chaotic scrambly brain, I get in my own head and find it difficult to notice details because my thoughts are going everywhere in every direction so please help me out. Thanks in advance my peeps >:)

~ Chaos💜

"Let me do my job and take care of you, okay? No fuss, no muss, no worries. Block out the world, turn off our phones, no TV. Nothing else matters. Just you and me."

WC: 3027

Summary: It’s been a rough few weeks for you and your wife between opening a new business, moving to a new house and reigning in a restless toddler so what better way to unwind than date night. You arrive home, surprisingly on time, only to find your wife dealing with a mental breakdown. She feels guilty for ruining date night, but you do your job to extinguish all of the negative feelings threatening to consume her and remind her of the love you share.

Adding a second link just in case ~ Here ya go