Hiii, I finished my first script!!

I'm hoping to post it officially this weekend but I'd really appreciate if a few folks have the time & willingness to beta-read or provide some advice first. Please mind the tags before clicking, its pretty dark & fucked-up and the last thing I'd want is anyone engaging with content they're not comfortable with just to help a newbie like me :)

Script Link (more info below)

Specific questions:

• Tagging: I’m not certain about the tags & genedered tags. I think it is mostly F4M because there’s a female speaker and a male perpetrator, but there’s also a second F character who ends up getting fingered by the F speaker while the M watches. Any thoughts or other things that seem missing, confusing, or unnecessary?
• Formatting: I’m brand new to the script format and to writing for VAs, so any notes on readability and amount/style of sfx and direction would be wonderful (both for this script or general advice for the future)! It's tricky to judge where the middle ground is between too much and not enough.
• General feedback on pacing, readability, length, etc. is also welcome. I tend to overuse things like italics and ellipses, so let me know if you think there are too many or if they're unclear/distracting.

Again, this is my first try so I’m not aiming for perfection or expecting it to do very well, I’d just love to know if you notice anything glaring that I should adjust before posting the offer. Comments, dm’s, and chats all welcome, just please be kind. Thank you!!
-Sunny☀️

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Script info:

"How badly do I want to stop you from raping her? Oh my god. I have to choose? My fingers, or... or your cock?"

Word Count: 2701

Descriptors: Speaker is described as having described as big, round tits. Listener/rapist is described as strong and having a hard cock. Sorority sister is described as tight.

Summary: This script depicts two sorority girls, the speaker and her freshman sorority sister (no actual relation). The sister is drugged at a party & passes out at some guy's house unbeknownst to our speaker. When the speaker goes to pick her up, she is encountered with the rapist and forced into a terrible situation, resulting in being raped herself and being forced to choose between fingering her friend while she's drugged or watching her be raped instead. Please be mindful of the tags.