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(even though I am also looking for feedback to always improve, please feel free to fill the script if you enjoy it!)
Hello!
Since National Superhero Day came and went, I wanted to work on this script idea for a super villain I’ve been thinking about doing… Because villains are just cooler. Anyway, I managed to write this beginning to end, but I need some help with it too. I’m posting as a script offer as is because it is completed for the most part, I may just decide to go back and alter it later.
*Please bare in mind there are 2 alternate endings! You can decide which ending you’d like to do, or both, if you fill the script.
What I’m looking for in terms of feedback:
• There could be something missing in terms of the plot and theme to really complete this story or make it more compelling, I just can’t figure it out!
• What lines or actions could be inserted within the sex parts that make it more erotic or part of the super villain storyline that’s unfolded here? In other words, are there any other tags that could be inserted to this script? And, what needs work or could be fixed?
• Please provide any other feedback in certain detail as you see fit. Thank you so much in advance if you take a look at it. Good day to you ☺
• DISCLAIMER: 18 adults ONLY~ This is a very fictional script that does not represent real people or their feelings/opinions. • Characters in my scripts are always adults 18 • Thank You!
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