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Hi!
I'm very excited to post this as it's my first script! I would love to get feedback and pointers (especially on formatting) just to see if I'm in the right track. I can't wait to write more, but I want to make sure I'm not making mistakes that would turn people away.
It's a fairly short script that I wrote in one sitting so any comments/tips would help me a lot!
Summary:
After a nice day out with your friends, you come home and decide to give your hard-working boyfriend a little surprise and stress relief. But he quickly realizes that, if you're gonna have some fun, it's going to be by your own rules...and he's going to have to work to get what he wants.
---> Here is the script !
Fill by u/yoursweetfantasy -> HERE
Thanks a lot to anyone who takes the time to read and comment! <3
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