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Hi there! I'm not new to writing, but I am new to writing scripts. I've had this one rattling around in my brain for a long time, and finally set to keyboard to get it into the world.
I'm really fascinated by the world of hypnosis, but I think there's a lot of angles that go unexplored in venues like this. I wanted a nice, sweet, wholesome take on it, from the perspective of the subject. It's written so the "inductions" are happening off-script, so there's time skips of what the narrator isn't remembering. There's a lot of ebbs and flows to this, a lot of sudden and abrupt stops.
Scene: You and your boyfriend/husband are spending a quiet night in and reconnecting, talking about things to try someday to keep things spicy. Then he drops the big one he's always wanted to try: Hypnosis. You're interested but not sure if it's real. He demonstrates and takes you for a ride.
The implied “triggers” are forgetting the number four, then at first sleeping when you count yourself down to zero, then getting progressively hornier when you count yourself down. Snaps are the sleep/wake up trigger, which here work as one since there’s not really a gap.
https://scriptbin.works/u/an-empty-mind/f4m-spicing-things-up-with-hypnosis-wholesome
This is an extremely rough draft, I'm sure it needs a whole lot more prompts for tone and probably more setup. I'd love some feedback. Thanks!
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