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Ahuva: It just looked… so unusual. Why would two people just flop about in their bare bodies and make those sounds? Why were they going at whatever that was so intensely?
Mash'hita: Man, they didn't teach you this shit in your education program, did they?
Ahuva: No.
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Summary: Ahuva, one of the highest ranking angels, stumbles upon an intimate activity she's never been exposed to during her daily duties. In panic and confusion, she visits her demoness friend, Mash'hita, to share her experience and seek an explanation. Seeing just how innocent Ahuva is, Mash'hita decides to take matters into her own hands, and show her the more hedonistic side of living that has been forbidden heaven-wide.
Hi, everyone! I'm back with another script, and this time it's meant to be a collaborative performance between two VAs. It's definitely the longest script I've written so far.
This time around, I wanted to really wanted to write something with a deeper storytelling element, and I'm also a big sucker for worldbuilding. So I decided to bring an idea I had brewing in my head for the past couple of days to life. Something about the idea of a demon corrupting an angel is just *chef's kiss.*
A few notes:
- The listener is not a participant, nor a "voyeur" in this script.
- This script has heavy religious themes, though it's not specific to any religion. It could possibly be taken as a little Judaic-leaning, with the Hebrew names and whatnot. That aside, there aren't any religious concepts unique to one religion being written there.
- SFX aren't required, but are definitely encouraged!
- I tried to write this similarly to a screenplay format, only with audio cues instead of visual ones.
- If you're wondering what the characters' names mean;
Ahuva = Hebrew name that means "beloved".
Mash'hita = Hebrew word for "corrupts" (in feminine form, as Hebrew is a very gendered language). Technically, it's pronounced mashchita with a guttural "ch" sound, but I know that's a difficult sound for a lot of people to pronounce, so I replaced it with an "h" sound.
I hope you guys will enjoy this script!
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