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Hello my Lovlies!
I just moved back into my apartment after 8 weeks of emergency repairs. Although I have days and days worth of work to restore everything (my bed is still currently in the kitchen and my birds are in my bathroom... make that make sense!) I obviously had to do this first because I can't think of a better way of celebrating getting my space back!
This is my first time experimenting with three different versions to choose from to improve inclusivity, and I can't wait to hear your thoughts.
This was a colossal project with both altering and recording three different versions!
This audio involves over 1.5 hours of FINALIZED edited audio, and while I've done my best to review each version, I'm only one person with a limited attention span. There's a chance I might have missed something, so if I have - I apologize. If you catch any wrong words of endearment, descriptions ect - or have suggestions for improvement for next time… constructive criticism is more than welcome.
I want to express my deepest gratitude to the incredible author u/soimamber AKA Moose, whom I had the pleasure of meeting through another writer. Moose is not just a talented author but also a sweet human being deserving of our support and thanks - show Moose some love!
Here is the link to their original M4F script
Notice from writer: “There is a bit of an argument at the beginning of this, overall a general miscommunication. It's resolved rather quickly and is completely taken care of by the end of the script. No one goes to bed angry in this house <3”
Engagement:
Open season for fun and flirting in the comments!
I encourage you to check out my "how to interact with me" post, pinned on my profile. It provides essential guidelines that ensure a positive and respectful engagement if you’re unsure about anything.
You can find a link to a Google Doc for anonymous and private feedback in the comments if you wish. Otherwise party it up in the comments.
If you enjoy my work and are willing and able to support, feel free to check out my LinkTree. A comment, share or upvote goes a long way too - So thank you from the bottom of my heart.
Description: You've had an absolutely terrible day. Unknown to you though, so have I. Bratting out doesn't exactly get you the attention you wanted, it does the opposite - only building up the frustration. An argument starts up between you two before dissolving when we bring up that one little rule you both adore. The beloved free use rule in the house. I get to use you however and wherever I deem fit.
A - Altered from original M4F
[F4F] That One Little Rule [Script Fill] [FDom] Mild [Argument] [Established Relationship] [Spanking] [Free Use Kink] [Teasing] [Clothing Rips] [Cunnilingus] [Fingering] [Body Worship] [Consent Checks] [Bent Over the Couch] [Aftercare]
B - Same as version A with some edits
[F4TF] That One Little Rule [Script Fill] [FDom] Mild [Argument] [Clothing Rips] [Established Relationship] [Spanking] [Free Use Kink] [Teasing] [Speaker Cunnilingus] Mention of [Girlcock] & [Hole] [Fingering] [Body Worship] [Consent Checks] [Bent Over the Couch] [Aftercare]
- Toned down language
- Feminine words of endearment
- Finger penetration
- Mention of Girlcock and Hole
- Use of spit for lubrication
- Feminine clothing such as lace and bra but vague on chest description
- Vague about additional orgasms
C - Second take, like pancakes somehow always turn out better (in my opinion)
[F4NB(A)] That One Little Rule [Script Fill] [FDom] Mild [Argument] [Established Relationship] [Free Use Kink] [Teasing] [Clothing Rips] [Speaker Cunnilingus] [Vague Listener Oral] [Fingering] [Body Worship] [Consent Checks] [Bent Over the Couch] [Aftercare]
- Gentler language
- More Neutral pronouns, pet names & words of endearment but there still may be a bit of a sapphic vibe. Open to Feedback
- Use of "Good Bean" instead of good Girl cause I thought it was cute - Give me suggestions!
- No spanking
- No genital mentions but mention of hole
- Use of spit for lubrication
- Neutral clothing
*Some more effort for clip transitions/edits, background, nose and mouth noises will be made going forwards 🤭 sorry I tried covering up with room ambience for time purposes*
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