(Crosspost from GWA! Reddit wouldn't let me do it properly </3)

After months of being entertained by your vampire dom(me)'s quirks, they decide it's time to focus on you for a while – and make use of those quirks to help out.

A gentle script/audio where your vampire dominant decides to make use of your enjoyment of their lack of a reflection by playing with you in front of a mirror, drawing the attention to you while their reflectionless hands move across your body to tease, and eventually make you cum. Afterwards, they cuddle you for a while, comfort and praise you, and tell you they love you.

References are made to your dom(me) drinking from you and sustaining themself on your blood, but the only biting included is gentle and playful/teasing.

Script: https://scriptbin.works/u/ruins-n-rambles/a4a-focusing-on-you-vampire-mirror-gentle-biting

Hello!

This is my first script, which is a little bit terrifying to post, but I've finally got around to finishing one! I originally started writing this for last years GWAlloween, but it's been a super busy year for me, so I'm glad it's done in time for this year!

Since this is my first, I would really love any feedback on it, good or bad, as I hope to continue writing here in future. I've primarily only written on Tumblr before, and that was closer to flash fiction than script writing, so it's an entirely new style to me.

Some stuff I'd love to hear thoughts on:

• Is this too gimmicky? Too much/too little focus on the vampiric side of things?

• Would multiple versions for A4F, A4NB, and A4M be preferable over total gender neutrality?

• Is it too short? Could it do with more fluff rather than just hitting a few points and then ending with an orgasm?

I've tried to make it as gender neutral as possible, and hopefully that hasn't taken away from it too much - feel free to tweak it however you like to include more gendered stuff if you'd like! Is it common to have multiple versions? I'd be happy to help out if people would prefer ones with gendered pet names and genital mentions if needed, but I probably won't be a great help in M4M stuff (but I'm happy to try!!)

If you'd like to give feedback but don't feel comfortable doing it publicly, feel free to message here or on Tumblr (ruins-n-rambles)! I can't promise a fast reply, but I'll make an effort to respond to any constructive feedback you have at some point!

Whether or not this gets filled, I really hope people enjoy it and have fun with it in some form!

Enjoy 💖

Reposted due to ordering tags wrong! Sorry for any confusion!