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This is a repost! I am deleting the original post as I made it on my main account and I want to preserve anonymity.
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You don't think you should be punished at all? Well you're going to have to convince me better than that. Get up here and show me how sorry you are. Maybe the taste of you will help me make up my mind.
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WELP I really wasn't planning to write this today, but I just couldn't stop thinking about it, and the responses to Part 1 were so sweet (y'all are lovely 😘😘😘). So here we are!
The listener appears to have come back for round two with our favourite orc girl. There are some echoes from part 1, but things progress a bit differently this time. I hope everyone gets what they need from Part 2. 😊
I had thoughts of leaving this open to further stories with these characters, but my true love is scenarios between strangers, and this pair developed to a point where I wanted an ending that wouldn't demand a direct sequel. The post-credits sequence is left as an exercise for the listener's imagination.
I'm still very new to writing scripts so I welcome (and encourage) any advice, criticism, or feedback that you may have!
Inclusivity Notes: No gendered body parts explicitly referenced, but breasts are implied. Mentions "wetness" and "juices" but not from specific genitalia. Lots of pet names, heavily weighted towards diminutive and feminine. Listener's clothes are coded femme.
Full list of pet names: slut, pet, kitten, good/sweet/dirty girl, sweetling, little one, toy, my sweet, dear
Written as a work of fiction for entertainment purposes. Created by adults, for adults, with exclusively legally adult (18 ) characters.
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