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Do these sentence structures convey the same notion?
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I have been reading two fictions and found there are three common ways to write repetitive words, but I have no idea when to use which one. For me, I can feel the tones of the first and second example have a sense of “urgency”. The third example is just a simple narrative.
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- John had backstabbed her, had contrived plans to ruin her.
- John had backstabbed her; had contrived plans to ruin her.
- John had backstabbed her and contrived plans to ruin her.
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