Hello there, everyone!

I'm sorry if this is an annoying question. I've looked through the sub, and surprisingly haven't seen any other posts like this. If mods want to delete this for any reason I totally get it.

I've recently got back into looking to find a partner in the Femdom community, and I put a couple of posts on personals subs. While I believe it's best to be as authentic as possible and not hide anything, I'm worrying that I may be coming off in a way I don't mean to. Whether it's just too wordy, a little spastic, or just in a way that portrays me not being "right" for the community.

I was just wondering if anyone could take a few minutes to read through one of my posts and give me some feedback? While I've done lots of reading, and feel I have a decent understanding of the community, I almost feel as if my post comes off as being in the wrong sub. I'm almost 100% sure I'm overthinking it, and I need to chill out. Yet, if there are any mistakes I'm making, I would definitely like to know so I don't keep making them.

No feedback is too small, and you don't even have to be nice about it! I just don't want to find out a year from now I'm only being a hindrance to myself.

https://www.reddit.com/r/femdompersonals/s/At0NnfnlNO

Here is a link to one of my posts. The others I have a pretty much just copy paste from this one.

Thank you in advance to any help, and happy to be back in this community :)