Hi there fellow writers! I’m trying to decide how the next part of my WIP should go. Quick summary A(F) and B(M) meet, are drawn to each other and have a one night stand. Circumstances throw them together and they form a close friendship (B hasn’t had many strong friendships in the past and is dealing with a lot of personal angst). They end up sharing a traumatic experience and B goes on to discover that their attraction and feelings towards each other are a pre-destined thing. Their intimate relationship is rekindled, but A doesn’t know about their shared destiny.

The question is this- I am thinking that when she finds out she should have some doubt about their relationship- does she really feel the way she feels because she loves B, or is the pre-destiny thing ‘making’ her feel this way, BUT should I let them enjoy some more happy together time before throwing in the angst spanner or throw it straight in during ‘the morning after the night before’? Additionally B is not a normal human- he is stronger and will live longer than A, do I throw in some angst around that, or will that be too much? I am new to writing Fanfic, (And I know the story line for this is tropey as hell, but, meh!) and I’ve reached a bit of a block on this bit. I do have some betas, but I like to have a full 1st draft before I send to them. Thanks for any suggestions any of you are willing to share.