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Feel like my writings too dry
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Just like the title says. I feel like most of what I write reads like an essay. I did have my husband read the first paragraph of my next chapter I plan on posting and he said he “had to push himself to read” which made me doubt myself more. I guess what I do is lots of high vocab but if I don’t use it I feel like I’m writing out a script so I hate it either way. Anyone else have this problem? How do I avoid sounding so stuffy?
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