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Elsa weaves through the narrow aisles of the shop, brushing past racks crammed with clothes that smell faintly of mothballs and age. Her fingers trail over the fabrics, lifting skirts, blouses, and dresses one by one. She looks for something modest yet professional, anything that might pass as suitable for the office. Most of the options are either outdated or worn thin, and she frowns, tugging her cardigan tighter around her shoulders against the chill of the dimly lit room.
Her movements are quick but deliberate, sifting through garments with a sense of urgency. The flickering light above casts shifting shadows across the racks, and she feels them move as if someone brushed against them. She pauses, her hand still on a hanger, and glances over her shoulder.
The old man isnât at the counter anymore. Elsaâs breath catches as she notices a faint shuffling sound. She turns her gaze back to the racks, her pulse quickening. Somewhere between the tightly packed rows of clothes, she catches the glint of his glasses. Heâs watching her, partially obscured by the hanging garments. His head tilts slightly, and the edges of his thin smile are visible through the gaps in the fabric.
A shiver runs down her spine, but she forces herself to ignore him, focusing instead on finding something appropriate. She lifts a navy blue dress that looks clean enough and holds it against herself, checking the fit in a cracked mirror nearby. As she adjusts the dress on the hanger, she can feel his gaze following her every movement, heavy and unrelenting, like a predator sizing up its prey from the cover of darkness.
As Elsa holds the navy blue dress up to her chest, the old manâs voice cuts through the silence, low and unsteady, like the creak of an old door.
âThat one might look nice on you,â he says, his tone dripping with something that makes Elsaâs skin crawl. She freezes for a moment, her grip on the hanger tightening as she stares at her reflection in the cracked mirror, pretending not to hear him.
He steps closer, his shoes scuffing against the wooden floor. âBut maybe⌠itâs a little too big for such a delicate figure,â he adds, his voice barely louder than a whisper but sharp enough to pierce through the stale air.
Elsaâs cheeks flush, a mix of embarrassment and unease. She turns slightly, trying to gauge his position without meeting his eyes. Heâs lingering a few steps away, half-hidden by a rack of coats, his small frame dwarfed by the garments around him.
âOf course,â he continues, his words slow and deliberate, âyouâd look good in anything⌠or maybe nothing at all.â
His gnarled hand reaches out, brushing lightly against her forearm, the touch as cold and unwelcome as the draft in the dimly lit shop.
âYou have such soft skin,â he murmurs, his voice low and rasping, as though speaking to himself. Elsa stiffens, her grip tightening on the dress, but she doesnât pull away, unsure of how to react. Her breath catches as his fingers linger a moment too long, tracing down toward her wrist in a way that makes her stomach churn.
âI can make you a discount,â he says, his smile thin and suggestive, his eyes scanning her with an unnerving intensity. âFor a customer like you⌠Iâd be happy to help.â
The old man watches Elsa with a knowing grin, his sharp eyes catching the way she hesitates. He steps closer, his voice dropping even lower, thick with false generosity.
âYou see, my dear, thereâs no one else open at this hour. The streets are dark, and other shops have long since closed their doors,â he says, gesturing vaguely toward the window where the faint glow of streetlamps barely penetrates the gloom. âIf you want this dress, youâll take my offer. OtherwiseâŚâ He trails off, shrugging theatrically, his smile never reaching his cold eyes.
Elsa swallows hard, her grip tightening on the dress. âIâll pay the full price,â she says firmly, hoping to end the exchange quickly.
But the old man shakes his head, chuckling softly, his demeanor growing darker. âNo, no, my dear. You misunderstand. Itâs my discount or nothing. And I donât just give discounts to anyone.â His words are deliberate, each syllable thick with implication.
A chill runs through Elsa as his meaning sinks in. Her instincts scream for her to leave, but the weight of her circumstances presses down on her shoulders. She glances at the dress in her hands, at the fabric that could secure her place at Herr Wernerâs factory tomorrow. Her pulse quickens as she weighs her options, her reluctance deepening with every second of his silent, expectant gaze.
As Elsa clutches the dress tighter, debating her next move, the old man ambles to the shop door. With a deliberate twist of the key, he locks it, the sharp click echoing ominously in the quiet space. Elsaâs heart skips a beat, her breath catching in her throat.
âNow, now,â the man says, turning back to her with a smile thatâs meant to be disarming but only deepens her unease. âDonât look so frightened. Iâm just an old man, you see. Been alone for far too long. Itâs not every day I get⌠company.â
Elsa forces a thin smile, her pulse racing. âI really just need the dress, sir. Iâll pay for it and be on my way.â
He chuckles softly, shaking his head. âAlways in such a hurry, arenât you young ones? Rushing off here and there. But you seeâŚâ He takes a slow step closer, his gaze flickering over her in a way that makes her skin crawl. ââŚitâs nice to have someone to talk to. To share a little time with. It gets so quiet here, especially at night.â
Elsa instinctively takes a step back, gripping the dress like a shield. Her instincts scream that this manâs intentions are far from innocent. The dim lighting casts long shadows across the racks, making the space feel smaller, more suffocating.
âI understand,â she says carefully, her voice trembling slightly despite her effort to appear calm. âBut itâs late, and I really shouldââ
âNonsense,â he interrupts, waving a dismissive hand. âYouâre safe here. No one will bother you. Just a little conversation, thatâs all.â
Despite his words, Elsa knows better. Thereâs something unsettling in his tone, something too practiced in his reassurances. She glances at the locked door, her mind racing for a way out as his smile lingers like a shadow in the dim room.
The old man steps closer, his movements deliberate, and extends a weathered hand toward Elsa. She freezes, her instincts urging her to pull away, but she forces herself to remain still. His grip is firm, his skin cold against hers. Slowly, he raises her hand to his lips, brushing it with a kiss that lingers just a moment too long.
âForgive my manners,â he says, his voice low and gravelly. âMy name is Herr Klaus Reinhardt. This humble shop has been my life for decades.â He releases her hand, his fingers trailing slightly before he lets go, leaving Elsa with an uncomfortable tingling sensation.
Elsa forces a nod, taking a small step back to put some distance between them. âItâs⌠nice to meet you, Herr Reinhardt.â
Herr Klaus chuckles softly, his gaze fixed on her with an intensity that makes her feel like prey. âAh, such politeness. Itâs rare these days, you know. And such a fine young lady like yourselfâitâs even rarer.â
âI really need to pay for the dress and go,â Elsa interjects, trying to steady her voice.
âBut whereâs the rush, Fräulein?â he asks, tilting his head. âSurely you can spare a little time to chat. Itâs not every day someone like you walks into my shop.â
The words hang in the air, thick with implication. Elsa shifts uncomfortably, clutching the dress against her chest as if it might shield her from his gaze. The locked door looms in her mind, and she feels the walls of the shop closing in.
Herr Reinhardtâs amiable facade vanishes in an instant. His hand darts out, snatching the dress from Elsaâs grasp. âEnough of this,â he snaps, his voice sharp and commanding. The sudden shift startles her, and she instinctively takes a step back.
He walks toward the register, the fabric of the dress clutched tightly in his gnarled fingers. âYou come in here, in need of my wares, and act as if youâre doing me a favor.â His lips curl into a sneer as he places the dress on the counter, his fingers drumming against it. âLet me remind you, Fräuleinâyouâre the one whoâs desperate. This shop is the only one open, and I am the only one willing to help.â
Elsa swallows hard, her heart pounding in her chest. âIâll pay,â she says quickly, trying to defuse the tension. âJust tell me how much.â
Herr Reinhardt shakes his head slowly, his eyes gleaming with a dark satisfaction. âOh, no. I donât think you quite understand how things work here. This isnât just about money.â
She stiffens, her breath catching. âWhat do you mean?â
He leans forward, his voice lowering to a conspiratorial whisper. âIâll give you the dress, Fräulein. At a discount, even. But firstâŚâ He pauses, letting the silence stretch, his gaze locking onto hers. âI want something in return. A favor, letâs call it.â
Elsaâs stomach churns as dread settles over her. She doesnât respond, her mind racing as she considers her options, every fiber of her being screaming that she shouldnât trust him.
âI want to have a look at your body. â says Mr Reinhardt
âAre you out of your mind?â she says, her voice trembling but firm. She takes a step back, her arms crossing over her chest protectively. âIâll pay full price. I donât need any discounts.â
Herr Reinhardt chuckles darkly, shaking his head. âFull price? Do you even have the money for that, Fräulein?â His gaze flickers to the purse she clutches tightly. âDonât insult me. I see desperation all the time. I know it when it walks into my shop.â
She hesitates, her heart pounding as her resolve wavers. The truth is, she doesnât have enough, and he knows it. She could storm out, but this is the only shop open. Tomorrowâs interview flashes in her mindâthe one chance to secure a lifeline for herself and Uwe. Without the dress, sheâll look unfit, and the opportunity will slip through her fingers.
âYou wouldnât reallyâŚâ she starts, but the words falter as she sees the steely determination in his eyes. Heâs serious, and she realizes her refusal could end badly. He might report her, or worseâspread rumors she canât afford in this precarious new life.
She closes her eyes, forcing herself to breathe deeply. Itâs just one moment. One humiliating moment. Better this than starving. When she opens her eyes again, theyâre filled with reluctant resignation.
âFine,â she whispers, her voice barely audible. âJust⌠letâs get this over with.â
A victorious smirk spreads across Herr Reinhardtâs face as he straightens, looking her over with a gleam of satisfaction. Elsaâs stomach churns, but she tells herself to focus on tomorrowâon the interview, the dress, and the survival it represents.
Elsa unbutton her coat, pull down her skirt, underwear lifting her shirt. She reveals a body that is young, femminine, tiny breasts with perky pink nipples. Her navel is prominent, and her bush cover her lady parts which are meaty.
Herr Reinhardt is ecstatic he wants to reach for Elsaâs body, but she retracts âYou only said you wanted to see me nakedâ
Herr Reinhardt frustrated, but fair âThatâs true. I will make you now a nice discount and I canât wait for you to come back. â
Elsa pull her clothes back up, give the man the cash takes her clothes, and goes out of shop.
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