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Thank you to u/iantheeroticwriter for the inspiration for Abby and writing this fun story with me!
This story is written in first person with the prespective of each person switching back and forth. The premise is that Ian and Abby have met and played before but not yet had penetrative sex before this night. Hope you enjoy!
Ian:
I would want you to show up in just a loose fitting dress no bra or panties. Once in my hotel room I want to pick you up you wrapping your legs around my waist and I’m going to press you into the wall and kiss you deep and hard. Our tongues fighting to occupy each other's space. Grinding and bumping my hips into you. Pressing you into the wall. I will carry you to the bed, still kissing you setting you down on the edge of the bed. Lifting and removing your dress.
Abby:
I will wear the dress I did that first night we met, black and flowy. Nothing else except my boots. You'll let me in the side door you always do. As we turn the corner to the stairwell, I'd grab your face, running my fingers through your beard and pull you into me, leaning back against the wall for support. I see your eyes flicker with lust and you swiftly lead me to your room. I drop my bag to the floor as you push me up against the wall. I hastily take off my boots while our tongues wrap around one another's. You can feel me drop two inches as I take off the second one, discarding the footwear to be found later.
You pull back and a devious smile crosses your face. I feel your arms brace around me and I jump as you lift me, wrapping my legs around your waist. You pin me up against the wall with your body. Your hips pressing into me firmly. I feel the bulge under your pants and wonder how tight it can get before needing to be released. You carry me to the bed still kissing and set me down with ease on the edge. As you move your hands from around my thighs, up my body, you slide off my dress. Revealing my completely naked body, perfectly in compliance with your earlier instructions.
Ian:
I will remove my shirt as you undo and remove my pants and boxers. With you sitting on the bed I’m going to grab your hair and bend down to kiss you before guiding my dick to your mouth. I’m going to say. “Suck it like a good girl Abby”. I’m going to keep your hair in my hand and push you deep down onto me enjoying the back of your throat as your muscles try to accept me. Working your head up and down the length of my shaft holding you just on the tip making you swirl your tongue around my engorged head. Before letting you make me cum, I will stop you and push you down on the bed.
Abby:
Not a second after I hear my dress hit the floor, I see you start to take off your shirt. I want to free your throbbing bulge and clumsily remove your belt, unbuttoning and unzipping your jeans. I put one hand on each hip and slide my hands down the entire length of your legs. I catch the top of your socks and slide my fingers underneath to remove them as well. I have to slide off the side if the bed onto my knees to fully undress you. You grab my hair and pull me up gently but firmly and kiss me hard. As you pull away and I open my eyes I see you staring at me with intensity.
You lower me back down to my knees, keeping your hand firmly in my hair, eyes locked. "Suck it like a good girl Abby" I hear you say. I barely wisper "Yes" before you push my face onto your dick, making me take the whole thing into the back of my throat. I gag a little as my mouth works to accommodate this new object. But quickly we find a rhythm.
You are true to your word in that you would help lead me to making you feel good. You keep your hand in my hair and force me to pull back, only letting the tip in my mouth. I swirl l my tongue around your engorged head. I feel that pulse. The one I can feel before I know I get to taste you. As I'm keeping my slow and study pace, you pull me back up and throw me down on the bed.
Ian:
“You were a good girl. Do you want to cum now?” as I’m looking down at you. I will move you further up the bed and crawl between your legs. Just blowing on your dripping pussy. I will push both of your legs back and apart so I can see all of your wetness.
With one long slow lick I’m going to taste you from your ass to your clit. Stopping on your clit and sucking it into my mouth. You moan and squirm. I can feel your heat and need to cum. I reach down and slowly put in two fingers angled up but so deep.
Slowly at first I work them in and out and ask “Are your ready to cum?” Not waiting for a response I increase my pace fingering you deep and hard. Never stoping on your clit. You cum fast and hard flooding my mouth. I continue on through two more of your orgasms. Soaking my beard. You relax and lay still. I climb on you, placing my dick right against you wet wanting pussy just resting there. “Did you like that”? We rest for a short time.
Abby:
I lay there, in shock that you would throw me down before letting me finish my work. You look down over me and say "You were a good girl. Do you want to cum now?” "Yes, please sir! I'm so wet." Together we move so that I can lay my head on the single pillow at the top of the bed. Time for me to be a princess. You crawl up between my legs and just blow. The wetness between my legs turns cold and I squirm in pleasure.
You push my legs back, spreading them far apart so that there is nothing left touching. You can see everything. You push back further so the the small of my back is lifted. I feel your face come between my legs as you lick from my ass, between my lips, and up to my clit. I gasp as I feel where your tounge started and twitch as you move so slowly. I start to squirm as you take my clit into your mouth. "Ian, that feels so good" I moan. I feel you press your fingers against my pussy. While everything is wet, you slide two fingers in with the tenacity and boldness of a man with strategy. I gasp as you usually start with one, but everything is so wet you keep going at a slow and steady pace.
You look up at me and make eye contact. "Are you ready to cum?" You ask. But before I get a desperate pleading "Yes" out of my mouth, you quicken your assault. I grab your hair and firmly pull. This seems to motivate you and you keep going, never letting up on my clit. I let out high pitched moan as I cum. Flooding your face, you don't stop. I cum again. You won't quit. A third time? "Yes, yes... fuck... yeah... right there... fuck, fuck... yes!" And I cum long and hard letting myself be free in your presence.
You climb on top of me. My body numb. Tingling. Every nerve ending alive with pleasure. I'm relaxed and still. You place your hard dick against my wet and wanting pussy as you give me your weight. I hear you say from somewhere close yet far away "Did you like that?" The only thing I can do is smile and hum an affirmation of yes. We lay this way for a short time.
Ian:
I tell you to straddle my face and suck me more. You obey and gladly sit on my face and grind your pussy onto my face before leaning forward and engulfing my cock. I moan as it hits the back of your throat and you push deep. I start working your clit and lips with my mouth. Just slightly fingering your pussy. Feeling how soft and tight you are after cumming multiple times. With my free hand I grab the small toy that was hidden before you arrived.
While sucking your clit and fingering your pussy I move the new toy to you back door and run up and down against it slowly applying more pressure. I know you’re enjoying this and and can feel your body reacting. “Be a good girl and don’t stop sucking” as you acknowledge me I’m going to push the toy deep into you and slowly work it in and out feeling you grip my dick and the toy.
Slowly increasing speed you near orgasm and stop sucking. I move my hand that's fingering your pussy and grab your head and start forcing you up and down on my dick. Pumping your ass with the toy and my face buried in you pussy you cum hard. Squirting everywhere. This makes me want to cum. I force your head down hard on my dick and fill your throat with my cum. Shot after shot filling you up. We collapse together catching our breath
Abby:
After I've mostly recovered you tell me it's time to get back on your face and suck you off. I eagerly obey your directions. I push my hips back and forth over your face before moving to your dick. I lick it from the base, up the shift, give one small swirl around the head before swallowing it whole. You react by a quick moan into my pussy, so I know I'm doing it right. You're taking it easier with my pussy this time. You know how much easier it is to get me to cum again after having gotten there the first few times.
I feel your free hand move and then something firm tap my asshole. We had talked about toys and I was in full support, I just didn't realize you had one for me. I rock my hips as you move it up and down and around, applying pressure. My pussy is dripping again with how good this feels and the anticipation of feeling more. I push my ass back, not knowing what it is that will be going inside of me.
“Be a good girl and don’t stop sucking” you say, I give affirmation while my mouth is still full of you dick. You pushed it in. I squeal and my hips rock forward before I push back with pleasure. I keep sucking your length making sure to be careful with my teeth. You start slowing pumping it in and out and I can feel the base. You started me on something small, maybe just a little bigger than one of your fingers. It feels so good having it fill my other hole while you work your fingers in my pussy and your tongue along my cilt.
You're filling all of my holes. I keep sucking with a frim even pressure along your entire length, paying extra attention to the head moving and swirling my tongue around, you move the smooth toy around it as I play.
You start going harder, faster. I'm going to cum and my body stiffens and I forget to keep sucking. Your fingers come out of my pussy and push my head back. Bobbing up and down again feeling my ass being fucked and my clit at full pleasure, I cum, hard. Squirting everywhere. You hand pushs down, and I feel jet after jet of your hot sticky liquid fill my throat. I'm unable to breath, unable to come up. I swallow everything you've given me and roll off you as your hand relaxes. We lay next to each other catching our breath.
Ian:
We collect ourselves and cuddle. However, I'm not able to keep my hands and mouth off you. I move up on top of you between your legs. Kissing you and feeling you. My dick is once again hard. Pressing down between you ass checks resting on all the sensitive spots. As I become harder and harder kissing you and feeling you buck into me I have to re adjust myself.
Abby:
We collect ourselves, grab some water, and cuddle a bit. But our naked bodies touching quickly escalates into more touching and kissing. You end up on top of me again. My legs straddling your hips. You press you dick between my ass cheeks as we continue to kiss. I feel you growing hard again and I thrust my hips up toward your body. You have to readjust yourself to stop from accidentally slipping in.
Ian:
I sit up and drag the head of my cock across your pussy right across your wet entrance and you wimper as I pause and hold. Then I continue up slapping your clit several times. I start fucking your wet slit sliding my cock across your clit. ”Abby you are so fucking hot” “Fuckkkk” “I want you so fucking bad” I’m going to grab my dick and start pumping it up and down across your entire pussy. Almost feeling it catch at your entrance every time.
Abby:
You sit up and I see you grab your cock in your hand and skillfully drag it from below up and through until you slap it against my clit. You say several things "I want you so fucking bad" "Fuckkk" "You're so fucking hot". I reply "you're fucking sexy" "you're making me ache for you" "ooohhh, fuck" My hips squirm as I you slap your cock across my clit. You start fucking my lips, almost catching the hole each time you slide up again. I'm getting worked up. It feels so good. "Fuck" I think. "use me, fill me, I want to feel that deep inside me"
Ian:
Just before you cum I’m going to stop abruptly. Causing you to yell out in anger and disappointment. “Did you want to cum” I will ask “sorry not yet”. I will flip you onto your side straddling your bottom leg pushing your upper leg to your chest and taking you by the throat. Squeezing you tight. My hard dick will be so close to entering you I’m going to have a hold of it rubbing up and down your slit. Lubricating my dick with your juices. We can both tell you want more by your whimpering and rocking your hips.
Abby:
I'm getting close to cuming, yes, yes. "What the FUCK was that?" I nearly shout at you as you stop everything just before I cum. You ask "Did you want to cum? Sorry not yet." Now I'm frustrated, my need to cum now urgent. You flip me to my side and pin my bottom leg underneath me and the top on you push toward my chest. Your hand comes around my neck. "Oh yes, I like this. This feels so right" I think. You squeeze and I love it. Not being able to take a full breath enhances what I already feel. I feel your dick so hard. I feel you grab a hold so that it doesn't slip but you can still lubricate it against my wet pussy. It feels so good. I rock my hips hoping that you might give me more. That you might use your fingers in me. I whimper and moan hoping that you'll read my mind. That you'll fill my needy cunt.
Ian:
My dick is so hard feeling you under me. “Abby are you ready to cum again?” You will look at me with lust and just shake your answer. You push harder into my hand around your throat encouraging me to go harder. I’m will start feverishly jacking my self off across your pussy. Just before I know your going to cum. I bury myself balls deep into your pussy. Forcing my hips into you hard. Your eyes go wide but your body is already cuming on my dick you can’t fight the pleasure of cuming on this dick. “Good girl cum for me baby cum all over me”. I’m will continue to smash myself into your cuming pussy over and over feeling every part of you. “Abby fuck I’m going to cum fuck. Where?”…
Abby:
I can feel your hard dick. It throbs under it's own weight. You ask "Abby are you ready to cum again?” I shake my head up and down, pushing harder into your grip around my neck. I give a look of longing and lust and desire. This is not about being ready. This is now a carnal need to release the tension in my body. You wildly start stroaking your cock over my pussy. Just as I'm about the feel that rush, that release, that anticipated gush, I feel something else.
I feel your hard cock pushing into my pussy. Unsheathed, bare, nothing between our two bodies. You are so deep. I feel your balls slap against my lips. I look up at you, my eyes wide full of shock. Unable to stop what is already happening I'm cuming hard all over your cock that's inside of me. I can't fight it, I won't fight it, I am cuming so hard. “Good girl cum for me baby cum all over me”. I hear you growl. You continue to fuck me over and over. My orgasim seems to last for hours. I start seeing stars. I hear you say “Abby fuck I’m going to cum fuck. Where?” "Ian, cum inside me, please? I want to feel it."
You cum for me. This being the second time tonight I wasn't expecting it to be just as much if not more. It's almost like I can see your cock inside of me releasing every last drop.
You're holding my now limp body in your hands. I've given every last spark of energy to you and I'm numb. Seeing stars. I feel euphoric. A coma of exctacy. Some how I come to be on back with you by my side. Holding each other close. We take our time just being here in this moment letting nothing else exist.
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