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Intro: the plot of my story
Two teen girls that think they might want to be dommes, both friends go to a bdsm club separately and run into each other at a puppy girl display. An older mistress interjects and sets up a challenge for the two young girls. The winner gets the loser as a puppy slave for one week. After the contest the loser tried to back out and the older mistress makes sure the bet is paid ;) The two girls go home together and get useto there new roles. A week later both girls return to the club
Hollie was extremely nervous, it was after a crazy chat with her friend Elise, she was called puppy (much to her dislike) that she came up with the idea to visit a BDSM club. She had fantasized a lot about being a Domme, having a slave girl at her disposal, or a complete harem. She thought about how they wold serve her, make her happy, get her coffee, carry her schoolbooks. And God knows what more. She had been watching films on the web, and there was so pretty weird stuff out there. Maybe too weird, Holly was a plain and normal girl, and this was maybe a bridge too far. But when Elise suggested she was planning to put theory into practice she thought she should be doing the same. Sitting at home and fantasizing about what could happen, it was not the real thing. At all! So, there she was, on the bus towards the centre of town, to the bdsm club âkinky townâ. She read some reviews and introductions, the only way to enter was either as an introduce, a puppy member or with slave statements. That left her the puppy member, and part of it would be what was called a âpuppy displayâ. What it was? She had some vague notion, but it would be a pretty tough ride. But she was tough and would show them.
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Elise was in many ways the mirror image of Hollie. She was gorgeous, blond hair, firm breasts, long. She was THE girl in her class. And unlike Hollie she had some amazing sexual encounters. Including one with an older mate, that was into kinky stuff. He introduced her to the concept of Domination. And having her at her feet made her feel so powerful. She guessed it wasnât much of a performance after all, since she lacked the experience. But they were both quite horny and it ended with a fisting penetration of the slave girl. It wasnât anything she ever experienced. And she boasted to Hollie about it, her best mate. Her puppy, she called her. And it gave her a sense of power, though she never came near controlling her. Hollie was tough, and visiting a BDSM club might put her on the right track! Â
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It was about 10 pm when Elise went inside the club; she was addressed by a man dressed in leather, boots, pants, gloves. He looked at her, and just said âpuppyâ? That was humiliating, damn she was n puppy, in a few years she would control a guy like that with a flick of her finger. But saying no now would expel her from entrance, so she nodded. But he wasnât satisfied, called, Catherine a puppy for you. There came a Domme of about 25, God she was gorgeous, red hair, green eyes, and a confident and mocking smile. âAh, a puppy! Great, let me have a look at herâ. She stepped up to Elise, and turned her around, now bent over and she let her finger travel along her ass crack. Elise got a fright; she wasnât her to be some fucking slave. She wanted to get up, but the man pushed her head down. âObey, little one, than you might come inâ.
It was over, the inspection. âOkay, what do you think you can be, D or s?â âD, mistress, definitelyâ. âIs that so? I am curious. Well we have to Domme puppyâs now, you can guess at least one of them have to serve me and John today. Or maybe, even better, serve the other puppy. Get in; I call you when the show begins.â
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Another puppy? Elise wondered, and the moment she stepped in she saw Hollie, standing on the stage, being tied to a cross, stripped naked. Yes, the other puppy, she was overjoyed with pleasure and wanted to get closer and drink in the scene!Â
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