My first FF piece! I've gone for a different style with this one, inspired by the amazing audios available on GWA and other great subs on Reddit. This is my attempt to write in a version of script-form, using the main character's internal monologue mixed with only their side of any spoken dialogue. Hope you enjoy it - would love your feedback on this one :)

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Is that Zoe?

I haven’t seen her for so long. I thought she’d left town? 

I mean, it doesn’t matter really – I still feel bad about ghosting the poor girl. Chris kinda forced my hand there, i guess - she got so jealous about me contacting my exes when we got together. Not that I blame her though, a girl with Zoe's looks could make anyone feel a bit inadequate.

Maybe I just told myself she’d left... To feel better about how I treated her…

She looks good, though… Really good.

What are the chances? Both here, shopping on a weekday? I mean, I’m pulling a sickie but I was sure she had an office job… Maybe she’s taking a personal day or something.

Christ, why did I let this one go? She makes me wet just looking at her – glowing auburn hair, those big soft lips, gorgeous bubble butt and smooth thighs… Mmmm… Come on, Vi, Better get a grip or you're gonna mess these leggings…

Shit. Now my nipples are hard... Great, now I’ve got to try and shop this rack with my forearms pressed to my tits like some big-boobed T-Rex. Smooth, Violet, real smooth.

Where’s she going? Over to the lingerie section?

I mean… I was going to look there anyway… Yeah… Nothing creepy here – just two hot girls shopping for underwear that used to fuck each other’s brains out on the regular.

Oh, they are fucking cute... Bitch, I’d do anything to see your gorgeous fat ass hanging out of those. Whoever gets to enjoy you in those is in for one hell of a show.

Yeah, that’s it, pair them with the sheer bra – show off those puffy nipples, baby girl.

God, I loved sucking on those perfect tits… It would always get her sooo fucking wet too…

I wonder who’s the lucky girl now?

Oh fuck, she saw me looking. Fuck, fuck, fuck, she’s coming over… Shit, shit…

“Zoe?! Holy shit, is that you? What are you doing here?! I thought you’d left town.”

For goodness sake, Violet calm yourself down.

“No? Really?.. Weird… I was sure you were moving up state or..."

"Shit, never mind – it’s so good to see you! What’s that?… How’s Chris? Yeah, um… Fine… She's fine, yeah. But how about you? You doing OK?”

Damn… those eyes. I’d forgotten just how stunning they are…. Those pretty green eyes staring up at me while she ate my pussy better than anyone ever has…

She sounds sad though… Looks it too... Don’t worry Zoe, baby, I’ll kiss your pain away – let Mommy take care of you and those sweet lips…

“Ugh… Work sucks, right? Tell me about it!… Still, didn’t expect to see you here on a weekday – you still working at Harper and Timmons?”

“Oh, OK, yeah – taking a personal day…”

“Shopping for your date tonight… In the lingerie section, huh? Fuck, I miss those kinda dates…"

“Relax! Relax, I’m teasing… just jealous of… Ha, yeah – never mind…”

Oh my God, I’m so fucking wet for this girl. How is it she's not in a relationship? Like, how is that actually possible? Surely every queer woman between here and the Pacific would jump at a chance with this one.

“C’mon then, let’s see what you’ve got there… Oh, yes – very nice. Green always was your color…”

“What do you mean, worried about how they’ll fit?... Let’s get a look at you… “

“Well, I think you look fantastic… Yeah, honestly… I think they’ll look incredible on you.”

“…Christ, I miss looking at your body…”

What the actual fuck, Vi’? Could you sound any more thirsty if you tried?

“Oh God… I’m sorry, Zoe – I… That just sort of slipped out…”

“Meant it? I mean, yes, of course I meant it but… I don’t want to make you feel uncomfortable or anything. Um, look… I should go…”

“Come with you? Where?… What do you mean?”

“Zoe, sweetie what are you doing? Where are you taking me? You can’t just... ”

“The changing room? OK, sure, but…”

Oh, oh fuck this is actually happening! Shit, she’s kissing me – oh my god she tastes so fucking good…

“Yes, yes, that’s it – I love it when you kiss my neck…”

Those little gasps are adorable.

“Yes, baby – you can touch them, just help me with the buttons and…”

Oh, fuck yes… She wants my tits – God, look at her go! She’s so eager. And I thought I was the thirsty one… Let me help you – let Mommy free her big tits for her baby-girl.

Oh Jesus, yes, that feels so good. You can suck on them all you like, baby. Yes, make my pussy all fucking wet…

“Mmmm… that feels so good, baby-girl… Did you miss Mommy’s tits? I think we should make you feel good too though, yeah?”

Let’s reach under your skirt and… Woah…

“So wet for Mommy – such a good girl…”

“Yes you are, sweet thing – such a good girl… You know what I want, though, right? You remember don’t you? You remember how good I taste?”

That pout. The sweet little mouth. Those wide eyes. Whatever possessed me to leave this perfect creature? What have I been doing wasting time with Chris when I could have been grinding my cunt against that pretty face every night?

“Yeah, that’s it baby - pull my fucking leggings down.”

Christ they’re ruined. How long has it been since I’ve been this wet for anyone – fuck, she drives me crazy…

“You sexy little bitch, look what you’ve done to me! I’m a mess down there… Look what you’ve done to Mommy with that perfect slutty mouth of yours… Now, you need to clean me up or there’ll be hell to pay….”

Oh, sweet Jesus, that tongue… Those lips…

"Keep licking, baby – that’s it…"

Fuck! I’ve missed this so much!

“That’s it Zoe, honey, make Mommy proud. Such a sweet, good girl licking my clit, making me feel so fucking good. God, you’re the best, you know that?… You were always the best, baby.”

That moan… Yes, you like that, didn’t you? You like it when I praise you.

“Yes, Yes, Zoe, that feels amazing… Right there.. Yes… Oh God… Don’t st… Oh… Shit.. Fuck, fuck – I’m gonna’ cum. Baby, you’re gonna’ make Mommy cum so fucking hard…”

Fuuucck!! Did that just come from me? Holy shit, I’m so loud! Christ, I’m gonna get us caught… I can’t control myself though – she’s incredible. I haven’t cum that hard in years. She’s so fucking good… Oh God, even now… Even now... the tip of that tongue just…

Oh Jesus… Again?!

"Oh God, baby, I’m gonna cum, don’t stop, don’t stop… Ungghh…"

Oh fuck, fuck!… It’s all over her top!… Have I ever squirted that much before? Holy shit, look at her nipples - hard under her vest, soaked with my juices… That’s so fucking hot…

“Come here, you perfect thing, Mommy’s not done with you yet.”

Her hair’s wet too! Jeez, I really did a number on her… Never mind, get that cute little mouth back on me…

“You like that, baby-girl? You like Mommy smothering you with her sopping wet cunt? You like it when I grind on that pretty little mouth?”

Those moans. I cannot wait to fuck this girl again.

Oh God, she’s gonna make me cum again…

“Aaah… Ungh… Fuck, FUCK!… Good girl… Very good girl…."

“OK baby, now get on the bench – on all fours, like you used to do for me, remember?”

“That’s my girl, now slide those panties off for me. Pull your vest down. Let me see you.”

Were they always so perfect? Puffy nipples just begging to be squeezed and sucked.

“Mommy can’t give you what she normally would, sweetie. You’ll have to wait to cum on my strap. But do you want the other thing we used to do? Our special thing?”

This bitch is panting, pretty cunt soaked and plump. There’s no way she doesn’t want my fist in her right now. I’m amazed she hasn’t begged me for it already – she used to love it so much. I don’t think I’ve ever seen a woman cum so hard in my life...

“Yes?… You want it?… You want my fingers, baby?... Good girl.”

The way the pleats of her skirt are spread over her fat ass make it even better. A pretty frame for the perfect picture. Oh, OK, wow.. she’s so soft, so hot inside, melting around my knuckles. Three fingers… Just look how she’s taking them… Oh, oh God, really? Four already? – Christ, I love how this girl moans.

Oh, she smells amazing. If we had time, I’d eat her out. I could eat that cute little pussy all day...

“Are you ready, slut? You want Mommy to fuck you hard?”

Begging me so desperately... That sobbing wail. It makes me drip.

Oh God, I’ve missed this! I love how greedy she is for me, pushing back - tight lips sliding over my hand – trying to suck me in. The cry of pleasure when she takes my knuckles…

Hand balled inside, this is what she loves – when I start to fuck her properly. I remember the first time, stunned how rough I could be – how she’d plead for more. God, I can feel her pussy clenching round my wrist already. Tighter and tighter… holding her breath… Shaking…

“Good girl, you remembered...”

She remembered to ask permission.

God, how I’d love to make her wait. Pull out of her sopping hole and spank her for asking to cum so soon. Abuse her until she’s screaming and begging for her release…

But she did ask nicely… I’ll leave the spanking for another day, perhaps…

“Yes, baby - cum for me. Be a good little slut and cum all over Mommy’s fist…”

Not like I’m giving her a choice… This little cunt is so fucking wet for me…

Oh, that’s so hot - God, look how hard she’s cumming – groaning and clenching. She loves it… Why did I ever let this one go?

Look how her juices are dripping down my elbow...  

“Just relax, baby, Mommy’s gonna take her hand back now… “

“Oh, you look so good, my sweet girl.”

I’ve missed that sight… Red, stretched plumpness of that perfect pussy. Cute little gape gradually tightening before my eyes.

She tastes how I remember, too… so sweet…

I want her so much. I can’t let her go this time. I can’t be without her again…

“That’s it Zo’… That’s my good girl. Come cuddle up to me – let me stroke your hair, baby. Mommy missed you so much…”

“No, I won’t leave you again. I’ll look after my sweet girl… Now, let’s buy you those pretty green panties and get you home so Mommy can see you in them."

"Yeah, that’s right, baby… I’m just getting started with you. We’ve got a lot of catching up to do…”