Here's the backstory to my new character. Let me know your thoughts on it and you'd do anything different :)

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Being Half-Orc in nature, Kro'Unk was nothing but a niceness to the townspeople of Hailsburg. Having enough they handed him over to the neighboring city Velez where they immediately put him into the Velezian Army. Not wanting to conform to the straight laiced, shoe shining, structured ways he struggled a lot and almost was put to death for the death of his commrad. With one final plea, he assured them he would change and would do anything to just stay alive. Reluctantly the commander let him live but only to make him work the hardest. Many days were spent fighting without rest only to hope that he would someday parish in battle. But that was the exact opposite! Eventually Kro’Unk was a master at his skills. He was feared in battle! His name known because of his bloodlust. Something in him changed. He obeyed every order, every command, just because he knew he could again slice the throat of another victim of his blood lust.

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One night Kro’Unk and a group of assassins were pulling a night mission in a small village. But went they thought they had won, something went wrong. Kro’Unk, again thirsting for the blood of his enemy, backed their target into the corner. Murmuring something to himself Kro’Unk took this opportunity to attack! Not even putting up a fight their target fell to the floor with him on top. Cheerfully starting to run his blade across his neck the blood shot out and burned his eyes. The victim lied there dead but Kro’Unk in pain and vision blurry hurried home. It was from this moment his life would be forever changed.

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His thirst for blood was even higher this time! He started eating his own. At this point the Velezian Army saw this could lead down a wrong path and decided to let him go. Kor’Unk agreed but his thirst for blood didn’t end there. Now he would hunt for only the good blood. The one he knew only came from ones that gave up a fight!