Status: Closed (thank you everyone for your wonderful responses!)

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Colours of pink, green, blue and yellow flash before my eyes as I kick around under the water, watching the fish dart around my body, back and forth, around and under. I smile, my dark hair washing out from my body, streaming in long strands in all directions. It’s soft like the moss found at the end of the pond, and makes me shiver as the ends brush lightly across my arms and shoulders.

I am running out of breath and decide it is time to go up. I take a lingering look at the multitude of life streaming around me before kicking with my feet toward the golden streams of light skimming the water above me like a halo. I break the surface with a gasp for air, water spraying about me as I roll onto my back, floating in the warm light of the day.

I kick out - arms and legs in all directions as I yawn, and strain - my muscles feel good from the stretch and I am limbered up. My stomach gurgles and I am ready to eat. Spinning to my front, I pull myself through the warm water to the edge of the pond, hoisting myself up on the soft grassy side of the bank, climbing easily to my feet.

The sun begins to dry my long, waist-length hair as it falls either side of my body, sticking to my back and the soft sway of my back and ass, and the rise of my breasts in front of me. I wander through the forest looking for my next meal. There is an abundance of fruit in the trees around me and I pick at several different pieces - orange, red, green - all with a different taste and texture as I chew and swallow.

Adam will be looking for me soon, his need for me is purely physical: each and every day he clumsily climbs atop my body, pounding and panting until he reaches his climax, emptying himself inside of me before rolling away. He has no other need for me. I don’t mind, because this is what God made me for, Adam's companion, the rest of my days I spend alone, exploring; those are my favourite parts of the day.

So lost in the bright, cheerful day am I that I fail to see you watching me. In the trees you have been following me for some time now, but I've been completely oblivious to this as you've longed to reach out and insert yourself into my life... but you don't want to scare me off, do you? Maybe today is the day you want to give me a glimpse of you, or maybe you just want to watch some more as I wander.

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Hello! So, obviously this is a Garden of Eden prompt. That much is clear. I’m not a massive theologist, so don’t fret, but the basic premise I want to play out is this:

I’m Eve (obviously), and I believe I was created to serve Adam, bring him his food, keep him company when he’s lonely (laugh at his stupid jokes) and lay beneath him when he wants to get off. He doesn’t care about my needs, in fact, it’s such a non-issue that I’m not even aware that I *have needs*. I’ve certainly never had an orgasm or been touched in a way that is pleasurable to me.

That’s where you come in

You’re the snake… ahem. Well, you have a snake, anyway ;) Between those gorgeous thick muscled thighs of yours. You’ve watched us for some time now, and you’re disgusted with how Adam treats me, such a gorgeous creature who obviously doesn’t even understand the pleasures of her own body. And you’re aching to remedy that.

What I’m looking for

A story : I would like this to be a bit of a story as well as the sexy times. How are you going to approach me? You’re a stranger in the Garden, and I’ve never seen anyone other than Adam before. You’re human looking by the way, not an actual snake (though I am a bit partial to the supernatural and quite like the idea that you can shapeshift… perhaps you start the interaction that way - or it interchanges as we go along - I have a few ideas around that), and compared to Adam, you’re a real man, you understand how to give pleasure - not just receive it. And you want so much to teach me.

Allure: Seduce me, in other words. Give me something to think about as I catch a glimpse of you around the garden. Maybe you don’t approach me directly, and instead you wait for me to notice you and then seek you out. When we are talking, let’s take day trips through the Garden as we explore areas that haven’t been seen before, discover new animals and sights as much as each other (there's something so cute about discovering beautiful places with a new person you're attracted to, it makes every interaction - even little hand touches - even more delicious)

Awakening my desires: Teach me what it’s like to have someone touch my hand, or my shoulder, run their fingertips through my hair or down my side… show me what it is to be kissed, and then take it just that little bit further. Convince me it’s okay to let go, to give in to the pleasures of the flesh, give me my first orgasm and watch as I grow, amazed at what my body can do. Each time I return to Adam, to lay beneath him, I want to know how that affects you, how you feel when you see I’m changing… with your influence…getting closer and closer to making my own choices and claiming my sexuality. I want the build up as much as the passion.

Taking the prize : And then, finally, make love to me, under that tree that holds the forbidden fruit, and have me discover what it’s like to let a man be joined with me, rather than only fucked. And once I know that feeling of your cock inside of me, taking me in a way that isn’t just getting pounded into, but something that is the union of two souls that have grown to love.

Then let’s run away from the Garden, together, and leave Adam to fuck the sheep ;)

Who I’m looking for

Someone not afraid to have a little fun. Punctuation, grammar and spelling are major turn-ons, (don’t freak out, I’m not the grammar police, just do your best). Character control is a big no-no, please don’t do that. You don’t need to write super long replies to impress me, as soon as you can’t go further in the scene without my character’s input, hand it over please. Please progress the story with me, get creative!

I feel like this RP is better geared to 1st person narrative, but I'm not worried about writing in 3rd if that's what you prefer, so feel free to respond either way and I'll switch if need be.

I need a character who can lead, and create a world where I (Eve) am simply wanting to be with you, to discover who I am, etc. Entice her, give her little enchanting moments that drive her to distraction, where she can't stop thinking about you, yearns to see you the next day, finds herself wanting to explore more with you. Obviously, that isn’t going to work with someone who wants her to take the lead - Eve has never done that, doesn’t even know what it means - you’re here to seduce her, awaken her sexuality, so … please be able to do that (that isn't to say she won't seek you out and initiate contact after a while, I'm a very interactive writer, you won't be doing all the "work".

And don't be cocky/arrogant - that's Adam - Eve needs softness, someone who adores her and doesn't see her as a conquest to won, she needs your heart, love and true desire to awaken in her all the pleasure she's never known she can feel.

I’m gonna be picky on this one, and I’m willing to wait for the right partner to play it out with, someone who understands what I'm seeking and is in it for the long-term aspect. I’m looking for a long build-up with lots of little teasing moments, but there will be a while until actual fulfillment of going the whole way. But if you want to tell me about what that waiting does to you (and what you do to yourself) as you see Eve return to Adam each night… that is always welcome and can easily be built into the RP.

I’m fairly vanilla - and I suppose to a degree that’s more what this prompt will be about, but I like to have fun inside of that. Profile here with kinks, interests, etc. but if you have any questions, please ask.

How to Reply

Send a PM (no chats) - more info on my profile.

Write a short response to my prompt, jump into the scene, make it your own - give me a good sense of your character as the sneaky snake / smitten Lucifer and how he wants to awaken Eve to all the delights life has to offer - but take it slow, a little mystery is good.

Other Stuff

I am never fast in my selection and will wait for the right partner who understands where I want to go with this prompt. It may take me at least 24hrs (or longer), so if you're debating sending a reply and worried about how long it's been, don't be, unless this post says closed submissions are always welcome. I'm also in Australia, so chances are I'm asleep when you're replying, so don't expect fast responses :)