I'm going to reach out to some IG influencers to post about my small business. I asked in a Facebook Influencer group for guidelines about what kind of copy works best for a photo-heavy medium like IG and didn't get an answer. I'm really l looking for best length suggestions (no more than X words). Any ideas? Is the following too long or not punchy enough?

"XXX is a woman-owned small business that sells things to help your dog travel safely, swim safely, walk safely in the dark and more! Sharon, the owner, carefully curates which products she sells, aiming for the highest quality. She’s also kicking off a new “Pack Leader” program where customers who sign up receive increasing levels of discounts in exchange for providing detailed feedback, photos and videos of the products being used. Pack Leaders can also recommend new products for the shop to carry, making it more of a customer-curated shop! Check it out at XXX.com!"